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I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love.
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 I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. I have no fucking clue what my subject is going to be about but it's poetry time.
Your begrudged smile begets desperate intentions of which I find no name.
As your mind expands from a dour form into something I may dare call disturbing.
Such is the nature of our relationship and alas it couldn't be anything but.
Our pressing burdens weigh into us forms unchanging.
I have no idea what that is refrencing, but it is expressive. Next.
And as we hold the universes secrets in our minds, we seek out exploitation and meaning.
As the world passes by, from our little window we watch, leaving only to impact it.
Our wishes and dreams are forgotten in our quest, and soon we join the masses.
Life begins to blur, and so do we with it.
Alright a little sad, kind of poetic, but I like the design. Next.
Flowers a plenty in a field we've sown. Our Triumphs only stall our defeats.
But we know we will continue, soldiering on as generations pass. Such is our nature.
Through the mellow eyes of disquieted men, we find ourselves at the precipice again.
We question our fate, but not until we have understood our truth.
Cool, cool. Little more detail, but it seems disjointed. I do like the vocabulary later on.
Anyway I'm good now what do you guys think?
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| Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:49 pm |
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. I am sad no one cares. whatever next topic.
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The truth to everything lies in nothing.
Games are awesome Nuff Said.
Fuck you all, I love you so much.
Storytelling is my true love.
I Thought of all of these statements in an instant.
I improv so well not improving is like retarding myself.
BLAH BLAH BLAH Pretentious crap, references, jokes, and contrary statements.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. Looks like Poetry and literature is for ppl writing stuff ending up never to be read, I SHOULD POST MY POEMS HERE I MADE FOR MY LOVED ONE
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. what, everything here is read.. perhaps not commented on, but read, nonetheless
sometimes the words of poetry are so good that even words, themselves, cannot comment on them
this is not the case, those poems seem generic
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who149 wrote: I'm trying i'm trying~ i'm making I'll try too slowly up my posting. At least once a day for a bit. Then I'll up that too twice, then four, then 8 and so on.
Until eventually I wake up one morning and find out that I am actually an Idiot hero.
On some quest too cheat on his gf or raise affection of 5 women who conveniently live in my the same dorm as me.
In which I only have 100 days to seduce them all.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. well I'm not referencing anything. I do better with subject matter but whatever. I like your opinion and I will take it in creation of my work.
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The truth to everything lies in nothing.
Games are awesome Nuff Said.
Fuck you all, I love you so much.
Storytelling is my true love.
I Thought of all of these statements in an instant.
I improv so well not improving is like retarding myself.
BLAH BLAH BLAH Pretentious crap, references, jokes, and contrary statements.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. I don't think it's generic. I found the subtle rhyme scheme quite clever. I used to write poetry; I'm a sucker for perfect little lines that fit together.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. maybe thier style is less generic.. but the subject matter.. the words, yes, thou art generic
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who149 wrote: I'm trying i'm trying~ i'm making I'll try too slowly up my posting. At least once a day for a bit. Then I'll up that too twice, then four, then 8 and so on.
Until eventually I wake up one morning and find out that I am actually an Idiot hero.
On some quest too cheat on his gf or raise affection of 5 women who conveniently live in my the same dorm as me.
In which I only have 100 days to seduce them all.
Remon wrote: Now we can dominate the porn industry, camera industry, AND the world! YomToxic wrote: YOU BETTER STAY ALIVE OR ELSE I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND RAPE YOU DEAD.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. The words? hmm... I thought it was the meaning. Was interesting. But not new. I have a big vocabulary, I should use it in my next work.
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The truth to everything lies in nothing.
Games are awesome Nuff Said.
Fuck you all, I love you so much.
Storytelling is my true love.
I Thought of all of these statements in an instant.
I improv so well not improving is like retarding myself.
BLAH BLAH BLAH Pretentious crap, references, jokes, and contrary statements.
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Re: I just played Dear Esther for five minutes. Love. the words, the meaning, both are generic, or rather, unoriginal
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who149 wrote: I'm trying i'm trying~ i'm making I'll try too slowly up my posting. At least once a day for a bit. Then I'll up that too twice, then four, then 8 and so on.
Until eventually I wake up one morning and find out that I am actually an Idiot hero.
On some quest too cheat on his gf or raise affection of 5 women who conveniently live in my the same dorm as me.
In which I only have 100 days to seduce them all.
Remon wrote: Now we can dominate the porn industry, camera industry, AND the world! YomToxic wrote: YOU BETTER STAY ALIVE OR ELSE I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND RAPE YOU DEAD.
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