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JasperBeauclair
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Sex stories
heres one of my sex stories.. *blush* http://pastebin.com/ZhhqxJHk i would love to hear your opinions
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Re: Sex stories
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JasperBeauclair
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Re: Sex stories
oh come on not that gross xD i have nastier ones and im more than happy to share
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Re: Sex stories
Really isn't disgusting, like, It might be not your bag, but's in no way objectively disgusting.
I think its a very good story, I really liked it, wished it was a bit more revised.
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JasperBeauclair
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Re: Sex stories
revised? i had a more broken english, quickly written one and this is the revised one what do you suggest its real i mean.. not suggest scenes -.- but how coud i write it better?
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Re: Sex stories
I liked it. I've never read a story like that from the girl's perspective.
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Re: Sex stories
i-its not fake i mean it happened o////o to me
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Re: Sex stories
UmbraeMaria wrote: revised? i had a more broken english, quickly written one and this is the revised one what do you suggest its real i mean.. not suggest scenes -.- but how coud i write it better? Actually, You can disregard that, I was just repeating my earlier sentiment.
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Re: Sex stories
Not bad, quite realistic from just behavioral perspective but it didn't turned me on. I guess only those who don't have real siblings can get turned by such stories.
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Re: Sex stories
Resilence wrote: Not bad, quite realistic from just behavioral perspective but it didn't turned me on. I guess only those who don't have real siblings can get turned by such stories. well emotionally we were real siblings while both of our parents were abusing us we were the only ones there for each other and we watched porn (even when he was younger) and since i was about 4-5 or whatever we had masturbated and played with each other and touched and well just everything i no wanna say kiss even though we DID kiss but on movies we never saw the inside of the mouth so we only touched lips very roughly and hard and up close to each other and well.. m-my point is i loved him as if he were blood, i mean he used to even change my diapers and .... woah i wonder if he ever played with my infant body hee hee u-uhm.. well... yeah you see my point? x///3 *rambling*
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Re: Sex stories
When I was 12 I had my first sexual experience. At the time, I lived in a little suburb outside of Cleveland and anyway, the girl next door and I were really good friends. Our parents were both gone for the day and she was over playing Transformers with me. So anyway, we kinda got.. Bored I guess? And we started playing truth or dare, which turned into ‘you show me yours, I’ll show you mine". So anyway there I Was, 12 years old, heart pounding, blood rushing in my ears, and the chick (who was a year older than me actually) takes off her panties and hikes her little skirt up. so What did I do, you ask? I whistled for a cab, and when it came near, the license plate said “fresh” and there were dice in the mirror. If anything I could say that this cab was rare, but I thought “naw forget it, yo home to bel-air!” I pulled up to the house about seven or eight and I yelled to the cabbie “yo homes smell ya later!” Looked at my kingdom, I was finally there. To settle my throne as the prince of bel-air.
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JasperBeauclair
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Re: Sex stories
i...i was following until the taxi cab.. xD"" *very confused*
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Re: Sex stories
UmbraeMaria wrote: i...i was following until the taxi cab.. xD"" *very confused* Y'all just got Bel-Air'd. Welcome to the internet.
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Re: Sex stories
Resilence wrote: Not bad, quite realistic from just behavioral perspective but it didn't turned me on. I guess only those who don't have real siblings can get turned by such stories. I have 5, lol.
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JasperBeauclair
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Re: Sex stories
i might try to write more.. just those are the ones i remember most well..theres also one from his house in a zipper closet but... its weird imo x//D
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