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Author:  JasperBeauclair [ Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:22 am ]
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uhm.. this my manga i made a few years ago xD"
it was previously called "fairy song" but now its called "in my world, i am beautiful"
this was the first draft i did and i think it kinda sucky.. but maybe you peoples might like it :redface

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modeste: *siiiiiiiigh* ....
executioner: para los crimenes contra dios y el rey de espana .. usted va a ser ejecutado por DECAPITACION!! (for your crimes against god and the king of spain.. you are sentenced to execution by decapitation!!!)
modeste: *shocked* hey who are you?! *thinking* eh?
man: what is such a beautiful girl doing in a place like this? sorry to have scared you
modeste: *thinking* girl??


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modeste: *under breath* b-but... i..im not a girl
man: a beautiful girl like you should be down there.. enjoying yourself and watching the execution of that capital offender..not up here sulking *glare* even though..you look absolutely beautiful up here -- you delicate fairy
modeste: oh no


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man: *pinning modeste* you arent fooling anyone, fairy. you brought that demon here didnt you?!
modetse vo: maybe if i could just..jump!


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modeste vo: when i landed, i ached.. my head was throbbing and whatever i landed on...was.... ... .. i met it, the big, bad wolf
rosendo(now his name is rose): que cono? (what the hell?)
executioner: para no dejes que se vallan! rosendo! (dont let him get away!)
rosendo: come with me! hurry! *grabs modeste*
modeste: ah wha?
modeste vo: ..he was truly frightening


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rosendo: i think we're safe here *takes dirty shirt off* hey fairy.. wanna watch?
modeste: NO! u-uh where are we? and who ARE you??
rosendo: im rosendo espinosa haha *scratches head* havent you seenna naked man before? this is where i raped the king's daughter
(i wrote that modeste said "180?!" or "IBO?!" but i have no idea what that is.....)
modeste: what?!
rosendo: kidding, kidding!


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rosendo: *takes cigarette from package* want one amigo? (friend)
modeste: sure, thanks
rosendo: de nada (welcome)
modeste: mh. so, er, why were you going to be executed? did you really rape the princess?
rosendo: haha no, not really.. the princess was my amante (my lover) but.. well she was human and im.. this. we made love here and her father -the king- caught us.


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modeste vo: maybe he isnt such a bad guy.. these humans just incarcerated him wrongly
rosendo: *sigh*
modeste: um, rosendo.. you dont happen to have anything i could change into would you? my dress ripped *stripping* *thinks* rosendo.. he looks so lonely*
modeste vo: he lost his lover... i could possibly replace her. if hed only let me.

Author:  Resilence [ Tue Jan 21, 2014 4:30 am ]
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I would, I would deffinietly say a few words about it but I'm kind of tired and I don't want to make it half-hearted or leave the topic empty... so someone remind me later to do that. Ok? Thx.

Author:  JasperBeauclair [ Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:43 am ]
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*sigh* ish ok if you wanna say critical words about this
im not good about working in public or having people watch me and my gf would always stare at me while i drew so.. my pacing and timing is off.. the art is sloppy (though it doesnt matter cuz its just a draft on cheap notebook paper) and my script is bad and unthoughtful xD""
i think my manga now is more skilled in pacing and such, im not too quick~ but cuz i dont talk much (have normal convo with people other than online...) im not that good at making a script.. i can think of a general idea i wanna get across, but i cant execute a normal conversation =[

Author:  Odin Anarki [ Fri Mar 20, 2015 9:23 am ]
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UmbraeMaria wrote:
*sigh* ish ok if you wanna say critical words about this
im not good about working in public or having people watch me and my gf would always stare at me while i drew so.. my pacing and timing is off.. the art is sloppy (though it doesnt matter cuz its just a draft on cheap notebook paper) and my script is bad and unthoughtful xD""
i think my manga now is more skilled in pacing and such, im not too quick~ but cuz i dont talk much (have normal convo with people other than online...) im not that good at making a script.. i can think of a general idea i wanna get across, but i cant execute a normal conversation =[

Roleplay, and try to become really fucking good at it, do it all the time, and master that shit. It's basically practicing script writing and it's how I did it. And now I write a paper essays in an hour or two. I imagine your script abilitys would improve massively too, just do dialouge heavy roleplay.

Author:  Rem [ Sat Mar 21, 2015 11:50 am ]
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Somebody remind Res.

Author:  Jewsus [ Fri Mar 27, 2015 7:48 pm ]
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Remon wrote:
Somebody remind Res.


lol

Author:  tuypo1 [ Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:21 am ]
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the images are broken

Author:  Valnik [ Mon Jul 20, 2015 3:24 am ]
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Yeah, image are down for me as well.

Author:  fluffy [ Mon Jul 20, 2015 7:46 am ]
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I think I might have them saved since I looked at them once. I might remember to post them but probably not. Yom should have access to them if I'm remembering right but with this stomach ache it hurts to think so a great big bowl of dicks for everybunny.

Fourteen minutes until headshrinking.

Author:  KingGMY [ Thu Jul 23, 2015 1:07 pm ]
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Post NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need to be critical.

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